Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that computers play a significant part in our hectic days. But some people believe that its drawbacks outweigh benefits special for children. I completely agree with this belief.
In today's hectic world, computers are existed in all houses and very accessible to children. But children indulge in using it especial for playing games or watching movies. If this approach continue prolonged, it will result to various side effects such as weakness of eyes, overwhelming and decentralization. There is an ongoing research that compare the degree of concentration on two groups of children and the results showed children with using computer less than three hours a day are more careful than other with overtime working with computers. Moreover, siting in front of screen and willing to eat will lead to increasing the obesity of kids. In addition, psychologist proved that working over three hours with computer make centralization in sleeping process.
Parents always complain that their offspring are consisting in using computer all twenty four hours of day. They believe that computer affect on their children's study. There are always keen to play the latest version of computer game and it prepared a sense of competition between them in playing game instead of in their lesson. Their exams results are under expect because of their indiscreet. They pressed this point with educationalist and requested from them to aware the children about the side effects of using computer too much.
In conclusion, it seems to me that although computer smooth the ways of doing our works but its disadvantages are more than advantages for children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ts always complain that their offspring are consisting in using computer all twenty four hours...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
...ng are consisting in using computer all twenty four hours of day. They believe that compute...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ours of day. They believe that computer affect on their childrens study. There are always...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75749252977 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.523686813 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16880939656 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568825416035 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420587870728 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108487741576 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244881255109 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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