Water is a natural resource that should always be free. Governments should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, one of the most important concerns of government authorities is to provide people the most vital ingredient of life which is fresh water. A group of people believe that water is a natural resource and it should be free, besides factories should not make profit of it through bottled waters and its production should be banned. This issue will be discussed.
One of the most important reasons for manufacturing bottled water is the general common idea that tap water is not hygienic which is thought provoking. Some individuals claim bottled water is much healthier than tap water and they even argue that it tastes better. Moreover, they assume that tap water is not hygienic and consequently they prefer drinking bottled water and this brings benefits for the producers and result in buying and selling millions of bottles of water all around the world. Furthermore, some fellows believe that bottled water is accessible in all super markets or small shops and is very convenient for travellers or other people to buy and use.
On the other hand, there are some detrimental effects of consuming and producing bottled water. Firstly, the plastic is not recycled and bottled waters add litter and waste to the nature; however, it destroys the natural environment and cause more specious to be extinct. Secondly, water is a natural resource and government should provide healthy water for each resident of the world. Finally, Government should ensure people by raising awareness among them that tap water is as healthy and hygienic as bottled water.
To sum up, although fresh tap water should be available for all the residents of the globe, producing bottled water seems to be beneficial in different ways. Government should enhance the quality of tap water and think up new strategies to tackle the environmental problems that the litter will produce.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12418300654 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59972198555 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496732026144 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3813685201 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412448817693 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178869897572 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103373138392 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298743448882 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706195708341 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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