What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?
These days, it is becoming increasingly popular to move to another country to live or study. However, some sociologists claim that this trend not only has a great deal of advantages but also many disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of moving to another country and offer my point of view.
Let's start by looking at the benefits of relocating to another country. One of its main positives is a higher salary. Take the USA for example. The majority of people decide to relocate to the USA because they are offered a higher salary in the same job than that of their home country. As a result, if they move to that English-speaking country, they can afford more things such as a house, a car and packaged holidays abroad. Another advantage of relocation to another country is a better standard of living. People tend to immigrate to a different country, as it offers better education and health care system. As a consequence, when they relocate to another country, they may send their children to better schools and count on a more decent treatment at a state-of-the hospital. After analyzing these benefits, it is clear that moving abroad is advantageous.
On the other hand, immigration has plenty of disadvantages. First of all, it often results in homesickness. Most people, who immigrate to another country, are willing to return to their motherland since they miss their relatives and friends. Therefore, if they fail to cope with this problem, they are more likely to come back to home country and miss out the opportunity for a better life. Secondly, immigrants usually face language barriers. What I mean by this is that once they move to a different country, they tend to encounter linguistic problems, which may cause misunderstanding at work and in daily life until they become fluent in the host language. However, it normally takes much time, effort and patience. After considering these drawbacks, it is obvious living in another country can be problematic.
All things considered, even though there are a lot of problems relating to immigration, I think that above-mentioned benefits easily overweigh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i mean, i think, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00837988827 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93732184436 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7529328994 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.380952381 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52380952381 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960691782052 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294869310977 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411274205312 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575050604551 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403489035878 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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