What are the pros and cons for children of watching television?
Nowadays, the number of children sticking to TV is increasing dramatically. However, some teachers claim that this growing trend not only has a great deal of advantages but also many disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of this phenomenon and offer my opinion.
Let us start by looking at the benefits of children viewing television. One of the main positives of this is that it usually boosts imagination. Take cartoons for example. They tend to enrich fantasy in youngsters because they are composed of colorful images and vivid pictures. Another major advantage is that it can supplement traditional form of education. In other words, if pupils watch documentaries about wildlife, for instance, then they can gain extra knowledge in addition to what they are taught in biology and geography classes at school.
On the other hand, watching TV by young people has plenty of disadvantages. First of all, it often leads to distraction from socializing. Kids barely have spare time to play with other children since they normally become addicted to TV. As a result, they are more likely to become less prepared for adulthood and interaction in society. Secondly, it usually deteriorates eyesight. As growing population spend in front of TV screen all day long, their eyes can become dry and, as a consequence, suffer from inactivity in movement. If they did something else every 15 minutes to exercise their eyes, the majority of children, who have eye problems, would have a better eye vision and would not have to wear glasses on a regular basis.
All things considered, even though there are plenty of problems in relation to children watching TV, I think that above-mentioned benefits easily overweigh the drawbacks.
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Suggestion:
...riorates eyesight. As growing population spend in front of TV screen all day long...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1149825784 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88179641433 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655052264808 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4380244698 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3529411765 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2352941176 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187394065066 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479775756148 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458579735344 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101675172676 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191444986729 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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