When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are many factors contributed to selecting a career such as a salary. However, I believe that there are many other factors that could be equally important as salaries like location, development, and advancement.
On one hand, a well-paying job is often one of the main priorities for any individual. Because earning money is necessary to meet basic needs. In addition, the more money people earn the more welfare and satisfaction they achieve and as a result of that their productivity would raise at their workplace. Psychologically speaking, when employees have a relief about their financial life, their job prospects would improve considerably.
On the other hand, there are a lot of relative factors contributed to job selection such as location, development, and advancement. Some people could not stand being a commuter of long distance every day and they believe arriving home early means using their precious time more effectively. For example, instead of wasting time when getting stuck in traffic jams, they could enroll gym classes and do some physical activities. Besides, development and advancement of the job can act as an encouragement and motivation for employees. A dead-end job could make people lose their passion and enthusiasm for learning and consequently, no promotion would wait for them. For example, typing letters on regular basis help typewriters being a master at that job but make them to fell useless in other innovative positions. Hence, it can affect them psychologically and professionally.
To conclude, although salary is an important factor in choosing a career, in my point of view other factors such as company location and professional advancement could be acknowledged as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the main priorities for any individual. Because earning money is necessary to meet basi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36263736264 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10295546139 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0063443296 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10924640491 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360818067661 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319970416515 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686865356946 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162917832279 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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