Write about the following topic:
Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed.
However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.
Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Experimentation on animals has been conducted for years to carry out scientific researches. Although a certain number of people are against the notion and is vehemently opposing it, another group of people believe that without these researches it will be difficult to make crucial discoveries. This essay will delve in depth whether the method is justified before looking into other altenatives.
There are several reasons why experiments are conducted on animals. Although experimenting on any living being is extremely cruel but the genetic composition of certain species of animals, for instance monkeys, match with humans which enables them to react similar to the latter, Hence, this facilitates the researchers to discover how a particular medicine will affect on humans and the the possible side effects. Besides millions of people will be saved from facing severe consequences such as side effects from medicines or antibiotics.
However, there are very few alternatives to this issue. One alternate solution could be if people volunteered to replace these animals thereby aiding the research with valid data. Consequently, there may be a possibility of risking their lives and the scientific community will have to provide severe compensation for the occurance of any side effects which may permanently incapacitate the person or permanent loss of life. Moreover, the scientific community are continuously in search of better alternatives and have expermented with many species but they resulted in finding naught.
To conclude, though experimenting on animals is deemed cruel to the general society but unless there are volunteers who come forward to replace these animals or better alternatives are discovered, it is imperative for the betterment of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...discover how a particular medicine will affect on humans and the the possible side effect...
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Line 2, column 384, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ular medicine will affect on humans and the the possible side effects. Besides millions...
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Line 2, column 384, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ular medicine will affect on humans and the the possible side effects. Besides millions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54044117647 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01952403715 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.1594715946 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213196109031 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773690878628 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527447866861 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127373861285 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334682466863 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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