Write about the following topic.
The quality of life in some big cities is getting worse.
What is the main cause of this and what solutions can you suggest?
Write at least 250 words.
As time goes by more and more people fall short of access to high quality life in the lion’s share of the megacities. It seems that the problem is rooted in two factors and a number of remedies could be suggested in this sense.
As regard to what causes the problem, perhaps the first thing that might spring to mind is the issue of population burst in such megalopolises. It is a common sight that the increasing number of the public are driven to big cities in order to make a living. The very matter of population explosion can simply bring about a wealth of challenges to the whole society including lack of appropriate lodging and access to superb facilities. However, another factor that may scale down the quality of life in such circumstances is the issue of pollution. The situation of such ailments as leukemia and lung cancer has taken an alarming turn in large cities recently and all of that owing to the adverse quality of air and water which in turn results from industrialization in metropolitan areas.
Therefore, to work out the problems and boost the quality of life a number of solutions seems to be due. First of all, the decentralization ought to be placed a cosmic significance in policy makings. If we manage to make a go of this process, a myriad of problems will be addressed as such. This could be done by creating more income generating job opportunities in smaller cities and rural areas. Another great helper would be leading policies and promoting trends in society which result in lower emission of greenhouse gases and waste materials into the atmosphere and water in some way.
As a conclusion, the factors of population burst and environment pollution appear to be the main causes. A well-planed response by the government to decentralize the members of the public and publicizing sustainable lifestyle among people may lessen the severity of the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85538461538 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89811201551 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547692307692 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1138147281 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133284208531 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424709513119 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247953280411 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698160089497 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352042301431 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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