Writing Task 2 essay Academic ieltsSome people say that relationships should be based on honesty and trust. Others believe that it is sometimes necessary to be dishonest in order to maintain harmony.Which approach do you consider to be better in relations

Values and important factors in relationships have become a contentious topic in recent times. Despite majority of people believe that being honest to loved ones is vitally important, others state that telling some lies can make a relation continue fluently. I completely would argue that telling truth is vital in all kind of relationships and this essay will support it with examples.

First of all, being honest is essential to have a successful professional life. Unless workers tell lies and keep secrets, they will land jobs with high financial rewards and able to promote faster. A team only can be successful if all team members do their best to complete tasks on time successfully. For example, when I was working at design company despite all colleagues were expert on construction, all projects were failed as one of them always postponed deadlines and could not send tasks on time to customers. Both design manager and owner of the company insisted her working there consequently others dismissed their occupation to be able to work at better teams.

Secondly, couples must trust each other to have happy marriages. In today's world, many female and male have to work to get dual income, hense they can not contact with each other frequently during day. They spend huge amount of time with colleagues than husbandsor vives as a result if they are aware of each others love, faith and trust, it will not lead to any phenomenons. On the other hand, many believe that telling small lies will result in success in marrige, but when truth is revealed, it will cause divorce in many cases. To illustrate, a study by Government of Sea in 2018 revealed that 80% of copules divorced due to the fact that they do not believe each other anymore even though they still love.

By way of conclusion, a successful relationship requires being honest in all cases and telling lies only damage it so they should be open to each other.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t so they should be open to each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, kind of, as a result, first of all, in all cases, in many cases, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8696969697 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57601602981 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2948951038 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183557300632 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068270221759 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545729801285 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129878629515 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441761889082 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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