Writing Task 2 (an essay)
Nowadays congestion and traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities. Some people believe it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be the solution, in your opinion?
In this age of urbanisation, with the rapidly emerging population traffic jams is the major headache of most of the countries. Some opine that widening of roads can eradicate this problem. I am strongly disagree with this option and in this essay I will put light on my thoughts which supports my view.
There are many reasons for increased traffic jams. The first and foremost reason is that nowadays people have lot of disposable income and due to that many people are able to buy the cars and they use the same for travelling a small distance which increases a traffic on roads. Secondly, people are alwasy in a hurry to reach their destinations and unnecessary break the signals and take wrong lanes that blocks the way for the people, coming from other direction and hence, blocking the traffic. Thirdly, despite designated parking lots, a lot of individuals are parking their vehicles anywhere on the road as per their convenience without thinking of the congestion it may cause.
Many people think that widening the roads can be one of the possible solution for this problem but according to me, roads are already wide enough for commuters to travel. To overcome this problem the government should provide timely and effective public transport so people are motivated to use the same instead of their private vehicles. Individual should opt for car pooling method, so they can save money and contribute in reducing traffic jams. Government needs to impose strict rules for individual who break the traffic rules and if they repeat the same, government should banned on their license.
To conclude, undeniably the traffic jams are increasing mostly in city areas which is becoming an alarming concern, however, by following traffic rules and imposing heavy fines to violators, by using public transport this problem can be controlled to an extent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...n eradicate this problem. I am strongly disagree with this option and in this essay I wi...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'traffic'.
Suggestion: traffic
...elling a small distance which increases a traffic on roads. Secondly, people are alwasy i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0487012987 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5691544286 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9154329173 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257118965366 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101942243686 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714273316937 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172037957576 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821646842263 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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