You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Environment
Population
Education
Issues relating to Environment, population and education are going to have severe implications around the world. This essay will discuss the challenges India will face relating to these issues. This essay will also suggest solutions for a country like to tackle these problems.
Developing economies like India are struggling with challenges relating to environment, population and education and the existing infrastructure and establishment is turning out to be inadequate to address them. Exponential growth in population is the root cause of all these concerns. The existing situation is so grave especially in metro cities that they might run out of natural resources like water and fresh air in the next decade if significant steps are not taken to address these issues. For instance, Delhi, the capital city of India, is regarded as one the top five polluted cities around the world. People have to wear masks and portable oxygen breathers while going out to avoid inhaling polluted air. Thus, if India does not take giant steps towards tackling these problems, it's cities would reach a stage where they become hazardous for human habitation within next decade.
Government has to undertake development reforms on multiple fronts like population control, planned urban development, enough opportunities for providing quality education etc. in order successfully overcome these issues and ride on it's growth trajectory. India needs to realize, the vote bank politics that different political parties in power resorted to has been mainly responsible for these issues. For example, India needs to look up to developed countries like USA, and Canada and study the development model they carried out over the years. Thus India needs to make significant and honest efforts to come out of the serious issues it is facing.
In conclusion,environment pollution, rise in population and inefficient education systems are severe issues for countries across the globe. These issues are even more serious in countries like India. This essay discusses the exact problems country like India will face over next decade. This essay also suggested solutions that governments in India can apply to overcome these issues and become successful.
Issues relating to environment, population and education are going to have severe implications around the world. this essay will discuss the challenges India will face relating to these issues. this essay will also suggest solutions for a country like to tackle these problems.
Developing economies like India are struggling with challenges relating to environment, population and education and the existing infrastructure and establishment is turning out to be inadequate to address them. Exponential growth in population is the root cause of all these concerns. The existing situation is so grave especially in metro cities that they might run out of natural resources like water and fresh air in the next decade if significant steps are not taken to address these issues. For instance, Delhi, the capital city of India, is regarded as one the top five polluted cities around the world. People have to wear masks and portable oxygen breathers while going out to avoid inhaling polluted air. thus, if India does not take giant steps towards tackling these problems, it's cities would reach a stage where they become hazardous for human habitation within next decade.
Government has to undertake development reforms on multiple fronts like population control, planned urban development, enough opportunities for providing quality education etc. in order successfully overcome these issues and ride on it's growth trajectory. India needs to realize, the vote bank politics that different political parties in power resorted to has been mainly responsible for these issues. For example, India needs to look up to developed countries like USA, and Canada and study the development model they carried out over the years. thus India needs to make significant and honest efforts to come out of the serious issues it is facing.
In conclusion,environment pollution, rise in population and inefficient education systems are severe issues for countries across the globe. these issues are even more serious in countries like India. this essay discusses the exact problems country like India will face over next decade. this essay also suggested solutions that governments in India can apply to overcome these issues and become successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47550432277 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85188752649 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544668587896 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9095455772 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201223651514 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763510153825 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801811387852 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158727517756 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105699353281 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.