You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Scientists agree that people ruin their health by eating junk food. Some people think that the best way to prevent people from eating junk food is to educate them, while others believe that this won't work.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Modern life has changed many aspects of our lives and our appetite is one of them. There are growing concerns that the regular consumptions of fast food would lead to health deterioration. While some scientists believe the key to change this pattern is educating people about the serious downsides of these foods, some argue that other measures must be taken and it’s not the lack of knowledge that has reshaped our diet.
Fast food consumption is a relatively new diet habit of ours and it is growing its way into our lives day after day which has a substantial impact on our health. Collected data shows that the people who consume junk food at least 3 meals per week are more prone to heart deficiencies and are more likely to suffer from cancer. Scientists, by looking at these data, are encouraged to suggest that some warning signs should be imprinted on junk food packaging, like the ones that we are familiar with on cigarette boxes. Yet, lack of knowledge does not seem to be the case and there must be other underlying reasons.
Foods which are being made from scratch is phasing out due to a shift in our daily routines. The primary reason of massive fast food consumption is not the fact that people are not fully aware of its harm, but it is the fact that in our modern excessively-busy life, we no longer wish to spend time in the kitchen and fast foods are surprisingly fast and cheap. Yet, people could be educated about other fast and still healthier options as today there are a wide range of health-conscious restaurants that provide such alternatives.
I believe to tackle the issue of unhealthy food consumption, educating is a vital step but not an enough one. Therefore, we need a more sophisticated solution which tackles the underlying reasons, not the most visible one. Introducing alternatives which suit our today’s pattern of life is the step which we need to take so we can ensure our health is not compromised in our way toward modernity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77101449275 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72291959399 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0377091972 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.615384615 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216360497534 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768735684456 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546382033589 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138434261455 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558939434249 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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