Young people are leaving countryside to live in cities and towns leaving old people in countryside
what are the problems
what are the solutions
As the employment plays an increasingly more central role in our life, it has been suggested that there is an unprecedented change in relations among communities by not only leaving hometowns, but also leaving the parents. Although, it is obvious that this proposition has many implications, there are certain approaches to eradicate this issue.
The main reason for this attitude in several individuals is, urbanization and industrialization, there are more jobs created in cities and town than villages, millennial that are educated look-out for jobs for future course, which makes them to navigate towards major developed places. Even though, technology has grown up in terms of quantity, the quality of personal touch has its place on the peak of the mountain. People who left their homes to work at cities, uses WhatsApp and Skype to communicate with their families, but the face-to-face interaction is at lowest level. This makes both the older generation and current generation people alienated from each other. Moreover, this tendency of leaving brought-up places will lead to underdevelopment of that place and this phenomenon influences other also, therefore, underdevelopment of villages are the prominent cause of this evil problem.
Nevertheless, this assertion can be shunned by many alternative solutions, one of them is to improve living standards that could be attributed to the change in lifestyle in villages, so that students who finished their education will work at the place where they grown-up. An another solution is to establish corporate sectors in underdeveloped sites. Governments should encourage or rather order companies to set-up their industries in villages, so that, the place will be developed. This generation in contrast, should tend to work at their place instead of isolating the family.
Despite there are many employment opportunities, good education and better healthcare in metro cites or towns, there will be devastating effects among the relations if they leave the elderly. As a solution there should be an adequate amount of employment and better standards of living should be developed in the countryside as par with towns so that they can never leave them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a solution' or 'another solution'.
Suggestion: A solution; Another solution
... work at the place where they grown-up. An another solution is to establish corporate sectors in un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41040462428 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06511576922 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56936416185 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.195109992 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143438736487 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466287271077 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469755251885 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886836640088 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447798458119 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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