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There are myrid of innovation that make our life easier.Such as, airplanes, cell phones machines. But I think the most important innovation is the computer. We save time and interact people all around the world, and make more money by using computers.
Firstly, Computers saves time. Nowadays everything moves faster and time is very important. Using computer reduce time that we spend outside. We can pay our bills without leaveing our homes, and also we can order a lot of things on online. Students do research on their loptop or their computers, they do not have to go to libraries. Even if you are a housewife you can find exotic recipiets on online you do not have to worry about your lunch.
Secondly,The world is more global now. People can communicate with anyone in anywhere in the world using technology and using computers is the best way. You can be guest a family from Japen. People find answers about a country from the people there. We can learn our languages too by using computers.
Finally, Nowadays, people earn money on online. Making new applications for smart phones and computers provides us some income. Not only way is making apps but also people can sell their products on online and they do not have to have a shopp or they do not have to store their products. Using computer and internet provide them many customers from whole world.
All in all, we can count many innovations that make our life easier, more interact to world but I think that the computer is the most valuable one. It provides us oppurtunities like making money, getting interaction with world and saving time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s, they do not have to go to libraries. Even if you are a housewife you can find exotic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78494623656 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48467509107 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544802867384 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9941066467 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.75 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.95 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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