A/D: An effective leader will make others feel like they are a part of making decisions.

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A/D: An effective leader will make others feel like they are a part of making decisions.

Submitted by vahid5570 on Mon, 06/29/2015 - 14:59

As far as I am concerned, a powerful leader can cause all members feel like they are a constitution of making decisions in that not only does it make they feel an important person, but also it cause they use all their power to fulfill their decisions.

The first point which should be mentioned here is that all members of a group feel they have tremendous people in the group seeing they are part of making decisions. As long as a leader contributes others in his decisions, all members of group are given a high confidence. In other words, they think profoundly in order to get new ideas, and share in the group. In addition, the spirit of union and alliance is promoted in the group. A leader can actually rely on his member. When being faced with a serious problem, leader can consult with them.

Another reason which can be seen by everyone is that all members are a part of making decisions is caused a sense of commitment towards it. Indeed, they use all their power to accomplish their decisions, should a leader consult with them. For example, when working with my classmate in a project, at first, I made all decisions for our group. In this way, he barely did their assignment related to him. After a while, I participated him in all decisions. It was caused he acquired a considerable enthusiasm to fulfill all assignments.

By taking to account all aforementioned reason, one might come to in the conclusion that it is wealth of beneficial for a group, if a leader use all ideas in his group. All members of group feel they are a substantial person. Furthermore, they exploit all their power to do the decision of their group. It is highly recommended that a leader makes others participate in all decisions.

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it cause they use all their power to fulfill their decisions.
it causes them to use all their power to fulfill their decisions.

It was caused he acquired a considerable enthusiasm to fulfill all assignments.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? related to 'cause'

it is wealth of beneficial for a group, if a leader use all ideas in his group
it is beneficial for a group, if a leader uses all ideas in his group

flaws:
No. of Different Words: 150 200

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 307 350
No. of Characters: 1378 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.489 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.613 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.059 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.979 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.369 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.162 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

It caused him to acquire a considerable enthusiasm to fulfill all assignments.

it has a wealth of advantages for a group, if a leader use all ideas in his group. IS IT CORRECT?

I have a big problem with using "cause" , can you explain the grammar that it should be used for it?

it has a wealth of advantages for a group, if a leader uses all ideas in his group.

Just remember, there is an object after 'cause' when cause is a verb:

You could cause them problems

don't put a complete sentence after, like:

it cause they use all their power to fulfill their decisions.

It was caused he acquired a considerable enthusiasm to fulfill all assignments.