advantages and disadvantages to have a large factory near our community
From my perspective, I think there are the advantages and disadvantages to have a large factory near our community. If one company decides to build new big factory it is good news for whom searching for jobs and it is a bad news for people who need tranquility.
A big advantage of having large factory near your community is having more jobs. For example my uncle has bachelor degree in mechanical engineering, but he does not have any occupation. So if a car company wants to establish a great factory, he can work in this factory and use his knowledge that learned in university. There are many people with different universities degrees that do not have profession. Also having works can decrease criminal and vice in the city, and families have better life style. Therefore it would be beneficial for my community.
In contrast, huge factory has loud sounds, heavy traffic and high pollution. For instance we have a enormous factory in our city. This manufactory produces cement for buildings. Every day it is emit very smoke in the air. Many trucks and various type of car derives to our vicinity because of this factory, thus the streets and roads are very tumultuous, and it is very difficult for you to travel in city, go to hospital or any other works you need to do. Also some people who lives very near to this factory explains very much for noisy circumstances , as much as I know they usually protest every year , to reach their voices to our city officials, but the negotiations so far failed to result in an argument. Hence constructing new factory has many disadvantages for my community.
As the aforementioned examples have illustrated, building new factory is both useful and harmful. It depends on your people to take decision about it. Do they need more jobs or need more calm?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'bad news'.
Suggestion: bad news
...s for whom searching for jobs and it is a bad news for people who need tranquility. A big...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...es degrees that do not have profession. Also having works can decrease criminal and ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...y, and families have better life style. Therefore it would be beneficial for my community...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nd high pollution. For instance we have a enormous factory in our city. This manu...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'emitted'.
Suggestion: emitted
...s cement for buildings. Every day it is emit very smoke in the air. Many trucks and ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ital or any other works you need to do. Also some people who lives very near to this...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...plains very much for noisy circumstances , as much as I know they usually protest ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s I know they usually protest every year , to reach their voices to our city offic...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...o far failed to result in an argument. Hence constructing new factory has many disad...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232558139535 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.165697674419 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104651162791 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0523255813953 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0813953488372 0.0685040099705 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0988372093023 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0232558139535 0.0351676179071 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76459638958 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0348837209302 0.0309702414327 113% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0668604651163 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00872093023256 0.0209618222197 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0145348837209 0.0139019557991 105% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1802.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 315.0 408.028673835 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72063492063 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292063492063 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238095238095 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161904761905 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76459638958 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55873015873 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 59.6806920196 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.515144872 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 41.3095238095 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.18446601942 1.45489161554 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406595933894 0.300154397459 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.063919411523 0.103427244359 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0714217919453 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.423073210086 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157421190023 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133089584718 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143043331514 0.0781384742642 183% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.281335986825 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0535028015535 0.067059652881 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266852392999 0.210909579961 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101804483947 0.0618886996521 164% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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