Agree or disagree? Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
In general, the way we think about life and how we spend it depends on our age. As we grow older, our view upon life changes, so will our behavior and way of living. This will directly affect how we will enjoy life. Some people believe that when we are young, we enjoy life more. From my point of view, young people indeed enjoy life more than older people, for two main reasons.
The first reason that immediately comes to mind is that we have a lot more energy when we are young. We have so much enthusiasm and excitement. We are fresh, energetic and robust. Our body is also at its best shape and ready to do every activity. In addition to that, our minds are very active, and we are very strong in terms of mental conditions and stress control. As a result, we can enjoy various activities that require certain amount of physical and mental qualities. Among those are activities such as different sports like bodybuilding, football or martial arts. Of course it would be very difficult for an old person to go to gym and lift heavy weights in order to gain muscle for example. In contrast, young people can not only do these tough sports easily, but they also can improve their abilities in them and advance to the top.
Furthermore, because of this powerful sense of enthusiasm in young people, they will enjoy other activities such as watching movies, playing computer games and going camping and picnics. On the other hand, older people are usually tired, both physically and mentally. Therefore, many of these entertaining activities do not sound so fun and exciting to them, and they often become bored very soon. As you can see, young people can enjoy many activities in life, while these activities may not be that much of a joy for older people, because of their age.
Another important reason is that young people are far more willing to experience new things in life. When we are young, we see ourselves at the beginning of a long and tortuous journey, so we are very excited to walk this path forward. We are very curious to experience new aspects of life as much as we can. Also, this strong sense of curiosity will lead to many discoveries. Learning and finding new things are enjoying for every person. Actually, it is human's nature to enjoy from experiencing something fresh that he or she has never seen or felt before. Again, older people are deprived of this facet of joy, because they have done what they could in their early years.
In sum, while there could be some positive aspects in older people's life which can be joyful such as their peaceful and tranquil life, in my view, young people enjoy the beauties of life a lot more. Not only they are full of energy to do and enjoy manifold activities, they also crave to experience new things.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in general', 'of course', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194244604317 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.134892086331 0.158761421928 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.131294964029 0.0866891130778 151% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0665467625899 0.046263068375 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0809352517986 0.0685040099705 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11690647482 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0215827338129 0.0351676179071 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.32595241366 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0269784172662 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0503597122302 0.0887237588012 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0287769784173 0.0209618222197 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0161870503597 0.0139019557991 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2778.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 496.0 408.028673835 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60080645161 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.274193548387 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.195564516129 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.125 0.174417080927 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0725806451613 0.112833075102 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32595241366 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489919354839 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 57.0355273218 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3703703704 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8323647798 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.888888889 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3703703704 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.740740740741 0.644075263715 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 37.9268219833 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.17834394904 1.45489161554 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240150266798 0.300154397459 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108315295485 0.103427244359 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0786828416446 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.457601299687 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126937965104 0.151897553556 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889164815235 0.114077575197 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101775501569 0.0781384742642 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.339386650395 0.336927656856 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0396541886624 0.067059652881 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18906649513 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762296702259 0.0618886996521 123% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8870967742 210% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.