Are parents the best teachers?
Parents are the kindest, most committed and most influential people whom any child has in his or her own life. They start their job as teaching their own child from the very first moment the child is born and never stop their job even when that child is mature enough to handle his or her own tasks perfectly. I do believe that parents are the best teachers that any child can have and I will try to explain some specific reasons which I think are the most common views with regard to this subject to support my idea in the following paragraphs.
To start with, I should mention that we cannot cast doubt on the fact that teachers play a significant role in their students' life. They teach them matters of science. In fact, the students get acquainted with science and technology when they attend school. But, the main question is, does really science shape and affect the students' future? I do not think so. My reason is that there are many people around the world who have no knowledge of science whatsoever but, they are handling their own life pretty well. Needless to say, some of them are quite successful in their own business. What this group of people has in common, in my opinion, is that they have learned how to handle their own life, how to become alert enough not to be deceived by scoundrels and these are in fact, the lesson of life which have to be learned merely by parents. To be clear, this is a universally approved fact that parents do not teach science to their own child. Instead, what they teach is much more important. For example, I remember the time when I was a little kid and my parents bought me a cat. They taught me how I can feed her, how I can play with her, how I can take her to the bath and things of that ilk. As a result, I learned how I can bond with another creature helping it when it is needed and enjoying of its companionship.
In addition, parents are the best teachers to their child because they help the child burgeon his or her creativity as well as ingenuity in home years before he or she attends a school. This leads to many opportunities the child will be faced with throughout their future career. For instance, my husband told me that his creativity evolved when his father learned him how to make a wooden bike in his free times by himself. He then tried to make other things using his own creativity. Now, he is a successful engineer who is interested in moving parts that are associated with automobiles.
To sum it up, though some may oppose my opinion, but I strongly believe that parents are the best teachers for their own child because of the reasons that I mentioned above.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'to start with', 'with regard to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.189591078067 0.229887763892 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.176579925651 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0669144981413 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0501858736059 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.126394052045 0.0685040099705 185% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102230483271 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0297397769517 0.0351676179071 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.411455821 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334572490706 0.0309702414327 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00185873605948 0.00188951952338 98% => OK
Determiners: 0.0762081784387 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185873605948 0.0209618222197 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0371747211896 0.0139019557991 267% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2658.0 2387.08602151 111% => OK
No of words: 487.0 408.028673835 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45790554415 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.268993839836 0.338922669872 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.190965092402 0.251872472559 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.11498973306 0.174417080927 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0636550308008 0.112833075102 56% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.411455821 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4681724846 0.524397521467 89% => OK
Word variations: 53.4939436968 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1363636364 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2937883127 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.818181818 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1363636364 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 0.644075263715 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.2328728766 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 0.910526315789 1.45489161554 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284014645564 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113385549757 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0863714904202 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.435598760932 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196872683463 0.151897553556 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100051642373 0.114077575197 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107961712591 0.0781384742642 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343619978579 0.336927656856 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.094341784409 0.067059652881 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253248205141 0.210909579961 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739888305932 0.0618886996521 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 21 Out of 30