Are parents the best teachers?
People are influenced by two different groups: family that they are nurtured and society which they live in. It is undeniable the intellectual, social, and behavioral influences of parents on their child. Although, some may claim that parents cannot be the best teachers for their own child, I personally believe that they have capacity to become the best teachers. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain some specific reasons to support my view.
To begin with, parents can be the most caring, most committed, most influential, and not to mention, the kindest people any child can have. When the family's first child is born, parents embark on a sequence of experiences linked to the child's development - from infancy and toddlerhood through school age and adolescence and eventually to departure from the nest. Each of these stages in child's life makes a different set of demands on parents. They create environments that learning process can happen. Parents usually spend a great deal of time with their child, thereby having considerable effects on them. They teach their child rudimentary skills such as how to walk, to speak, to play, and to eat and tend to transmit the valuable lessons learned through experiences they have made to their child.
Also, they do not judge their child and let them express their own opinion quite free. This definitely helps the child declare his or her own view while having no fear or stress. Knowing the child's genuine opinion, parents can teach them how to discriminate between right and wrong. This leads the child's personality to be shaped.
Next, compared to the parents, some may believe that school teachers are the best teachers. Despite that parents may be as erudite as the school teachers, but I cannot concur more with the fact that what a child learns from his or her parents is more important than that from the school teachers. Teachers teach us wide variety facets of science such as biology, chemistry, physics, and geology. But parents teach us how to be a morally good person, how to be strong enough to overcome any encumbrance that we might be faced with in our life, and how to offer solace to people who need it.
Last but not least, no matter how old a child is, I think that individual still needs to learn things from the parents. Moreover, parents' commitment to the child obliges them to sacrifice part of themselves for the betterment of their child. They want their child to be far superior and they do their best. So, I think that they are the best teachers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'i think', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204280155642 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.151750972763 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0875486381323 0.0866891130778 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0428015564202 0.046263068375 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.079766536965 0.0685040099705 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.091439688716 0.118717715034 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0233463035019 0.0351676179071 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63937756002 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0486381322957 0.0309702414327 157% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.079766536965 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0214007782101 0.0209618222197 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194552529183 0.0139019557991 140% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2587.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 437.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91990846682 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33409610984 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256292906178 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153318077803 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105263157895 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63937756002 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524027459954 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 60.1923691002 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8636363636 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1702885306 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.590909091 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8636363636 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.4929269815 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.16312056738 1.45489161554 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330084481887 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106433753637 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785121085891 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489639240545 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134198242929 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142349644168 0.114077575197 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152730732371 0.0781384742642 195% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357074851971 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.080850048298 0.067059652881 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252433484598 0.210909579961 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111146563377 0.0618886996521 180% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30