A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

The discussions have often occured worldwide in various conference on how to protect the environment and various possible measures have been taken so far but the measures taken are not sufficient in protecting environmental conditions glaobally. The consistent decline in glaciers and increase in global warming proves that we are still lacking behind in guarding nature. Nature supports humanity and humanity supports different types of arts but the most important call to action as per government, various NGO and industries is nature that is our environment, the place we live in. In paragraphs mentioned below I have thrown some light on the key supporting idea.

The first key aspect is that countries are really serious for taking measures in the enviromental research and studies. Not only this but, environmental studies is being taught to students in their schools, so that when they grow they can actively support this cause. Various movements and government aided projects like biogas as a new fuel energy cannot disprove that this sector is the most desirable today.
For instance, people started using renewable energy resources like one mentioned above and stopped using natural resources because of the decrease in their availability.

Furthermore, countries like Germany have been investing too much into generating energy from wind and solar. In addition, start of environment friendly bags company has given a boost not only to the industries but also to the good health of people. Disease like cancer, asthma are all result of negligence of nature. So, investing money in it for more awareness and preventive measures will surely help for the betterment of society, which in turn will promote different form of creative and more innovative art with good health.

Therefore, more and more should be acted upon the conditions and environment we are into followed by people, industries showing more interest in this as one of the best research fields to spread hapiness among humanity forever. To balance the harmony between true art that is nature and the man made art.

Votes
Average: 8.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25970149254 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71814935798 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6419402088 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135453235962 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399725701496 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037434517743 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625172665127 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330770668392 0.0645574589148 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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