countries should not isolate themselves from the world but instead engage with other countries use examples and reasons to support your answer.
In today’s world many countries are facing lot of problems, which includes violence, terrorism, racism and constant threatening from neighbor countries. The reason behind this is the lack of understanding and unity with each other and also with other counties across the world. In my opinion, I strongly believe that countries should not isolate themselves from other counties instead it should get along well and maintain healthy relationship with other countries.
First of all, when there is any catastrophic disaster occurs, which includes weather problems, volcano, flooding and epidemic disease outbreak, we are all human beings should help those people who really suffer from these adverse consequences, irrespective of which country we belong to. We should provide them emergency medical care, transportation to bring them to safer place, funds for their food and shelter and so on. This gives us self satisfaction and also mutual benefit among countries. As a result, we develop healthy relationship. Further, when our country suffer from similar problems in future, they will help us in the same manner. This brings world peace and integrity among nations.
Secondly, engaging with other countries also helps to develop our social and economical growth. This is because when we maintain healthy relationship naturally we start our businesses worldwide which includes, import and export of goods. Further, it helps to develop social interaction among people across the world, gives us an opportunity to learn their culture, customs and tradition and language. In addition to that we can share our views and ideas about almost every field, which includes information about science, technology, research, education system and so on. This helps us to implement new ideas for the development of our country.
Finally, people can pursue their education and career opportunities abroad, if we maintain good relationship with neighbor countries. This helps them to gain enormous knowledge and key information, if they study in reputed universities globally. Further people can have better living conditions by having decent job with high salary in different parts of the world. On the other hand, if we do not maintain healthy relationship with other countries, our country will be completely isolated and no countries will lend a helping hand when our country face difficulties. Further, there will be constant threatening from enemy countries.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, countries should not isolate themselves, instead they should maintain healthy relationship with other countries in order to maintain world peace, integrity among nations, for mutual benefit, for the growth and development of social and economy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ur country suffer from similar problems in future, they will help us in the same manner. ...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...es also helps to develop our social and economical growth. This is because when we maintai...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...study in reputed universities globally. Further people can have better living condition...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stant threatening from enemy countries. In conclusion, I strongly believe that, ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'as for', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263048016701 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.114822546973 0.158761421928 72% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0897703549061 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0542797494781 0.046263068375 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0751565762004 0.0685040099705 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112734864301 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0125260960334 0.0351676179071 36% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.81168477659 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0208768267223 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0521920668058 0.0887237588012 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027139874739 0.0209618222197 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0208768267223 0.0139019557991 150% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2745.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 419.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.55131264916 5.86048508987 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.443914081146 0.338922669872 131% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.334128878282 0.251872472559 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.245823389021 0.174417080927 141% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155131264916 0.112833075102 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81168477659 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529832935561 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 60.3619646149 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.95 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.891027462 48.84282405 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.25 120.699889404 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 54.3628878282 45.7405998639 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.58974358974 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348794916752 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0561482421133 0.103427244359 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0582832778537 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.476499692144 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172517029627 0.151897553556 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125549073966 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947973492813 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.309236466739 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0642866232255 0.067059652881 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256965055708 0.210909579961 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101971495916 0.0618886996521 165% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.