D/A: The government should support artists rather than allow them to support themselves.
Modern art rarely surprises us anymore. The idea that modern artists should be admired all over the world and even be supported by the government is mistaken. As far as I'm concerned, unlike the past, artist nowadays are fully capable of self-reliance. Besides, they make little contribution to the society. Most of their works are of low quality since they only care to meet the mass culture. Therefore, there is no reason for government to pay the heavy price for them. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
First of all, it is generally accepted that more and more artists today co...
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artist nowadays are fully capable of self-reliance.
artists nowadays are fully capable of self-reliance.
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