No one can deny that there are plenty of things those has special values in our life. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely choose a book as an important object that plays a vital role. It is my firm belief that the book is very special in my life for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, during my great depression, I took support from so many self-help books. Self-help books are those which help you to uplift your emotions and make yourself realize that you are so much special. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, when I was an undergraduate, my score in the academic sector was declining rapidly. For that reason, I choose the self-help book named 'The Power of Subconscious Mind' by Joseph Murphey. From that book, I got motivated and help myself to reduce my depression. As a result, I secured good grading during that period. For this reason, books are the special object that helped to make me so much motivated.
Secondly, you can be an erudite person if you can choose the right book. There are different genres of books like historical, scientific, and so on. By reading different types of books, you will be able to know so many things. Drawing from my own experience, these days, I am reading different genres of books dividing them into a particular month. For some months, I read one kind of book (maybe historical), and next month I dwell on to next genres. . It's certainly clear to see why I am becoming a more self-taught person day by day.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that the things which is precious in my life is book which helped me to develop myself in various things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55763239875 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5661966308 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8517305234 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2777777778 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146722694102 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460574025609 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504395903252 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879351605473 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548310569642 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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