A developer has proposed three reconstruction plans for the local community. Which of the following plan would you choose? Why?
1) Performance arts center
2) Hotel
3) Shopping mall
What is the most suitable reconstruction plan for the local community? Here comes three options for this topic: the performance arts center, a hotel or a shopping mall. From my point of view, I believe that the developer should propose the reconstruction plan of the hotel for the following reasons.
First of all, all reconstruction plans come with periods of time when people cannot use the certain services. And it goes worse when the service is shopping. However, the alternative, the reconstruction of the hotel, will not touch this problem because local people seldom go to the hotel than they go to shopping mall. People need to buy household goods for their daily life, but when it comes to the hotel, it is a new story. I am not saying that the hotel is not the key for the local community. The reasonable fact is that people, the local residents, can totally tolerate a period of time absent of hotels-they barely need to go to hotels- but they cannot make it through when it is hard to get daily supplies.
Moreover, hotels play an dispensable role in the local community. When a swarm of tourists come to visit this place, they need comfortable places to rest, to sleep. And here comes to our “dear” hotels. It can be referred that more suitable, costumer-friendly the hotel is, the more likely costumers will be to choose this hotel. Thus, after reconstruction, more tourists will be gravitated to this luxury, garden-like hotel. Consequently, to some extent, the economy of the local community will be enhanced with the climbing rate of tourism. For instance, during my family vacation in Sanya, which has the most beautiful beach of China, I was impressed by the fine, stunning decoration of the hotel I stayed; the bed of the hotel room is so comfortable that it feels like you will sink into the mattress once you touch it. The unforgettable memory I had in the hotel is one of reasons that I suggest my friends go to Sanya as their holiday destination.
Finally, the reconstruction of the performance arts center is a waste of money. The intrinsic of going to the performance arts center is enjoying the art, the performance, itself. People do not care much about other things, like whether the building design is cool enough or not. For example, I saw a play in the theater last year, and the play was a nightmare for me, probably for most of the audience, in that the actors even forgot their lines for many times at the determining scene of the play! I did not enjoy the play at all even the theater looks rather cool.
All in all, due to the above reasons, it is plausible to say that the developer should propose the reconstruction of the hotel for the local community.
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...I did not enjoy the play at all even the theater looks rather cool. All in all...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230627306273 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.136531365314 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0719557195572 0.0866891130778 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0535055350554 0.046263068375 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0571955719557 0.0685040099705 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114391143911 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0221402214022 0.0351676179071 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80187827781 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332103321033 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.136531365314 0.0887237588012 154% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.020295202952 0.0209618222197 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0129151291513 0.0139019557991 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2714.0 2387.08602151 114% => OK
No of words: 475.0 408.028673835 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71368421053 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286315789474 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206315789474 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147368421053 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103157894737 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80187827781 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492631578947 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.6794739686 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.652173913 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4222200796 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.652173913 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 41.2837528604 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.48507462687 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457598204921 0.300154397459 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136286950917 0.103427244359 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108753763651 0.0752933317313 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.561119244942 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184670140284 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191668400891 0.114077575197 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114417296786 0.0781384742642 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.519164927212 0.336927656856 154% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.05915395225 0.067059652881 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347569182689 0.210909579961 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969354072109 0.0618886996521 157% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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