This is era of modernization. Government play substantial role on education system. There is no shortage of debate whether government support primary school of children or university students. From my vantage point, college youngster contributes the country growth rather than immature school students. I feel this way for few reasons which I will explore in following paragraphs.
First of all, new generation people are future of the nation. The university students are mature and they understand value of education on competitive world. The government financial support promote to the student to attend university. There are plentiful student need financial aid for complete study, so government should spend money on scholarship and fundamental facilities such as library, cheaper transportation system which are allured the students to study on university. More students participate in university, then society become educated and it is help to country growth. Furthermore, interesting facilities of university tempted many foreign students to enroll in university. It is help to improve country status and fame.
Secondly, bolstering university students get huge benefits to country commercialization, trade and enhance the international business. Educated youngster invention of new thing and causes foreign investors develop their business in our nation. Gradually, each states growth strengthens economy of each city. In addition, the college pupil research in medical field and achieves immense success on research. Increases disease, infection and health problem need to find the solution; this is possible by youngster who diligent work and intelligence lead to find lots of medicine and treatment for serious diseases.
In conclusion, although some people believe that elementary school students requires more government support for basic education, I think that government give more precedence to university students education because mature pupils not only make educated society but also they help to country growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85858585859 4.8611393121 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02936386494 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.2062277668 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127672136537 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03596024687 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029758631539 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780181662433 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020530895227 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.41 10.9000537634 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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