Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (not my essay, just for comparison)
I disagree with the statement above. Although I admit that honesty should be one of the most
important consideration in human relationship, sometimes white-lies are neccessary not to
damage the relationship.
First, it is not good to tell someone his or her faults or defects directly. By doing so, you might
feel good about telling the truth, but it could hurt the people who will listen. It is naturl that
people make mistakes and not everyone is perfect. Despite those shortcomings, we live together
by understanding each other and tolerate those errors as we could be the one who makes the same
mistakes next time. By being pointed out our mistakes or things other people think abominable,
such as the way we look, the clothes we wear, the way we talk and so on, we might hate the
person who criticize us rather than being thankful or correcting those.
Second, it is better not to tell someone serious facts that can possibly discourage him or her. I
speak this from my experience. About one year ago, my nephew got into a terrible car accident
and the doctor said he won’t be able to walk again. We were all shocked and felt desprate.
However, my other nephews decided not to tell the fact to their mother as she could pass off or be
shocked to generate other problems of her own. I felt guilty about not telling the truth to her, who
was relieved and became hopeful by the white-lies that her son would be okay. One year since,
my nephew is getting better and his mother has been a good supporter. If we had told her the
truth, she would have been so desparate that she couldn’t have taken good care of her son and her
own health would have been in danger.
All in all, even though honesty is obviously great virtue, “always telling the truth” is not the key
to maintaining good human relationship. By refraining from telling the truth in certain occasions,
we prevent other people from being hurt by the remarks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 61, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70434782609 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49747446472 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7606511536 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4705882353 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.53405017921 485% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122584338499 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498972490745 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515626432844 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0411606244819 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430759132285 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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