Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For any business to be successful, it must spend a lot of money on advertising
Competing world leads business to consider about the ways of attrackiting more customers. More customers, more profit. One of the impressive way of making new customers is Advertising. Although most people believe the quality of a product or services are of the most significant reasons for purchasing it, I believe totally differently. In my point of view, businesses must advertise and also spend a lot of money on that for reasons below.
First, although quality is an indispensable requirement to persuade poeple to buy a product but it is not sufficient. People should get familiar with the product and it’s features to get encouraged to buy the product at least for one time to try it. Then, in the first experiences of a consumer, the quality plays a critical rule. But, the only things that make a person to buy a product for the first time is that the consumer want to buy it, because he knew about it and want to try it. And this would not be probable to happened without advertising.
Secondly, adverstising help to make a powerfull brand for a company. The image of a company can be build through the powerfull advertinsing campaigns. People always trust companies with a prominent and well-known brand. Therefore, in this way the company can reach to some crucial goals which are selling more and making more profit. Also advertising makes individuals be more loyal to the brand and it is so important to be in the mind of a consumer perpetually and the customer never forgets the company.
Finally, the unconcious effect of advertising make people to buy in unporpusly. For example, when a costumer see the advertised product in a supermaket, he immediately recognize it therefore, he whould be more reluctant to buy it. While, a costumor’s attitude towards an unknown product is probably just passing by. So, advertising increase the possiblity of impulsive buying of a product which leads a company to success.
Briefly, inttroducing a product, attrackting more customers and increasing brand awareness of a company are the most contibuting factors of a prosprous company. And these three things can be acheived through huge amout of advertising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04155124654 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03213402687 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504155124654 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3124166536 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140288742273 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447846290179 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654926108172 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784415370084 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439145557496 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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