Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
We have to admit that the world is changing so quickly even faster our imaginations. The new things come to the word, may become old-fashioned in short time after its invention. In my opinion, with this nature of the new world, people are more happy and satisfied than the past. Here are my reasons which will be elaborated in the next paragraphs.
Firstly, the pace of changing the world have provided us many opportunities to live better than past thanks to new technologies. In the modern world, we see a tremendous stream of innovation and genius to the human life which made it much easier. In the past people had a just one communication device, now we see the appearance of new electronic devices in the market one after another. In the past, people had a difficulty in traveling and seeing the other parts of the world and in the most of the cases, it was not possible for them to travel distant area. Now we see people travel so fast from south of the world to north and from east to west in just couples of hours. With the rapid change of technology, the time for traveling is decreasing constantly to provide the human more pleasant travel.
The second point to mention is that in the world that changes so fast, we have more opportunities to show our latent abilities and talents. It is clear that in the modern world, the young people have a more chance to be prosperous. With a rapid world, the man who has an innovation in his mind could share his opinion with the world and may become a wealthy person. For example, the person who is talent in marketing could use the internet to show or advertise his product to billions of people around the world the ability which was not possible in the past.
Finally, as the world change so quick we have a chance to pass our fails fast. As the world changes fast, we may try new things which can bring us more satisfaction. For example, someone who fails to learn the course in the university can simply try online course which in turn, can learn the course even more complete or faster. With the fast change in the world, we may see more opportunities for a people who want to learn as much as possible.
To put in a nutshell, I believe that fast changing world can lead to more satisfaction for people thanks to new technologies, better platform to grow our talents and more chance to pass our fails. Although, it can not be denied that this change for some people is unpleasant and make them stressful. But considering the reasons I mentioned, we should utilize the new nature of the world for better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'in short', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20939334638 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.138943248532 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101761252446 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0645792563601 0.046263068375 140% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0587084148728 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115459882583 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0234833659491 0.0351676179071 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48787328415 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0430528375734 0.0309702414327 139% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111545988258 0.0887237588012 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0254403131115 0.0209618222197 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0195694716243 0.0139019557991 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2576.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 468.0 408.028673835 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50427350427 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286324786325 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.166666666667 0.251872472559 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.117521367521 0.174417080927 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0790598290598 0.112833075102 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48787328415 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425213675214 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.2138866773 59.2087087015 80% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2857142857 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.35116993 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 38.9523809524 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.32835820896 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376552403363 0.300154397459 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144428462862 0.103427244359 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.077176399666 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.60191489916 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.104840879259 0.151897553556 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17815372858 0.114077575197 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785372617653 0.0781384742642 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.51150011851 0.336927656856 152% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0855488344077 0.067059652881 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278858189627 0.210909579961 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846876442566 0.0618886996521 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.