Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that the best way to travel is in group led by tour guide, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that travelling with group led by guide is the best way to travel because there are so many reasons supports my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that travel with group led by guide is very convenience. The guide has a lot of information about the places and he can put best schedule to our tribe. So, the guide will manage our time in the best way in waste which we can enjoy each single moment. However, travelling alone need a lot of information to gather and such thing will waste our time.
Another point why I advocate that travelling with group is very interesting and very suitable. If we travel with group, we will meet new people and learning different things from them. Eventually, such tripe will give us a chance to make new friendships. Moreover, we can spend nice time together by playing different type of games while we are in our way to the place that we intend to visit, instead of going alone.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that travelling with group led by guide is very comfortable. The guide will be responsible to book the flight, reserve in the hotel and provide best way for transportation. So, we do not need to think about such thing and that will provide enough time for us to prepare for our tribe and enjoying out time. Additionally, the guide may provide a good discount for the tickets.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion which says, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'put the best'.
Suggestion: put the best
...information about the places and he can put best schedule to our tribe. So, the guide wi...
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Line 8, column 176, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...ok the flight, reserve in the hotel and provide best way for transportation. So, we do not n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60674157303 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52409171985 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0811005932 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236451807814 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806214719707 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891987473722 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127636524682 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115036849935 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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