Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling is one the most joyful experiences in our lives. By taking some time off from the routines of our daily life and being to somewhere other than the same old neighborhood we get to refresh our minds and souls. Some believe that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide while others disagree. In my view, traveling with a group of people with whom you feel comfortable with and a guide that knows around adequately can is better for two key reasons.
First, having a person who is familiar with the new city or place you have been to allows you to get the most out of your time while visiting various locations. It is entirely possible that one would miss some of the most fascinating landmarks in an unfamiliar environment if not properly advised. For instance, my aunt told me that during the trip they had to the neighboring Turkey, they had little preparations beforehand as for where to go once they are in Istanbul (capital city of Turkey). As a result, they made the decision to sign up o a tour which fortunately for them was going there exactly the time as they were. She was fascinated by this experience since they managed to visit 15 distinct places including monuments, resorts and famous landmarks in a course of a single week. There were numerous tourist attractions such as cruising in the Bosphorus Strait and the Dardanelles that had it not been for the deep knowledge of the local tour guide, my aunt would have never enjoyed. As you can see, being able to use the services of a good tour guide can increase the quality of your trip significantly.
Second, While traveling with a group, there are lots of discounts and offers that can be used which makes the otherwise expensive trip, affordable. I remember when I traveled to Dubai for the first time I registered for a tour there with my mother. At first, I was reluctant to do s however, Having checked all the prices and the options available I had reached the conclusion that it was the most economical thing to do. Once we arrived at the hotel, the tour guide began explaining the different tours and their corresponding costs in the lobby. It was fantastic news for me. We could sign up on most of the tours for half the price since all them had group registration discounts. The great desert safari, Wonderland water park, and many other things were suddenly within reach. Owing to this development and the time I spent with the great group of our companions it became my best trip ever.This taught me the financial benefits one can get from traveling with a tour to another city or country.
In sum, While some may disagree, I find the idea of traveling with a group led by a tour guide fascinating. Not only does it reduce your expenditures considerably but also enables you to experience the most while visiting a new place. I think every body should try this kind of treveling as fast as they could!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 443, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... guide that knows around adequately can is better for two key reasons. First, h...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'allow'.
Suggestion: allow
... the new city or place you have been to allows you to get the most out of your time wh...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s entirely possible that one would miss some of the most fascinating landmarks in an unfami...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... companions it became my best trip ever.This taught me the financial benefits one ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, as for, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2388.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56596558317 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58314215214 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516252390057 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5640725873 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.545454545 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7727272727 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212864955366 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662493058114 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648795361674 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143104111121 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366405119893 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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