Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our life is full of numerous discrimination such as nationality, race, ethnic, skin color, sex and etc. and we sometimes receive them and sometimes impose them .Although man and woman are different from physiological point of view but they are both human and they will shape the most significant part of society called family. As far as I am concerned, this prejudice back to sexual segregation between boy and girl at schools.
We are always observing arguments and contradictions between women and men which I believe this contradiction route into their sexual segregation in society. In fact, this discrimination put men and women opposite to each other then they always want to express their superiority while both of them know they are same and there no distinct between them. From my point of view we can remove this prejudice just by starting from basic level and for next generation. In fact boy and girls attendance in same schools show them there no difference and this ideology will be carved in their mind for the rest of their life.
Apart from above point I stated, I believe other severe problems between boys and girls is because of being lack of awareness of their each other’s characteristic, traits and physical differences. Therefore we can remove this unawareness just by growing up together during their distinct development stages. In fact boys and girls learn how to play together, study together, eat together and so on then these simple collective behaviors express their differences and learn how to cover these differences to have a sufficient relationship.
To conclude, at first I think we should remove all the labels which have been given to people around the world and we should know, we are human and I believe the first step we should take is attending boys and girls to same schools.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...istic, traits and physical differences. Therefore we can remove this unawareness just by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, i think, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98045602606 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79523621536 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547231270358 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9335979974 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877301442908 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354565487904 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448227167274 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630245965005 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367276154148 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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