Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Each country has its own culture, which is unique. A culture shows the way of life of people in those countries. The culture can express in many ways such as food, language, performance, lifestyle, clothing, sport, animal, transport, and so on. In my opinion, people are likely to talk about other countries culture by discussing about their traditional performances. I totally agree that the traditional dancing really impacts one’s culture.
First of all, dancing is easy to digest and absorb. There is no language barrier between the performance and the audiences. Moreover, people in every level can reach the meaning of the show with no background knowledge required. Without saying any words, people can understand the play clearly. That’s because people can imply the meaning of the show by the performers’ movements, body languages and face expressions, and the rhythm and tone of the playing song. Consequently, comparing to other cultural expression, dancing is completely defeat others.
In addition, people are likely to appreciate beautiful performances. In the traditional performance, the presenters have to dress the most extravagant costumes in the country. Not only the costumes, but also the well practicing of the performers, everyone dance in the same rhythm, which make the show powerful and memorable. There is no doubt why the performance impressed the audience a lot and it will be pressed in the audiences’ mind for a long time. To recall my experience when I was in Bali, Indonesia, I had a chance to see the traditional Bayon dancing which was so excited and nice performed. I can remember the costumes of the actors, which wear the head of Bayon (the creature in the Bali’s fairy tale), and actresses (the princess in Sarong and blouse) from now; even it is 5 years already.
From the aforementioned above, it has proven that dancing plays the major role in a culture. Dancing can be touched by everybody and I am sure that everyone will be impressed it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, really, so, well, in addition, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14634146341 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01139887768 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9099417 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8421052632 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944753783328 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329478860352 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459181365786 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679058252376 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383786031005 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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