Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Whether or not the large family is less significant these days than it was in the past is a reasonable case has been subject to debate. Some believe large family does not make sense in modern society while some others disagree. I side with former because not only can people connect each other easily in these days, but also government support whole families. In addition, families which have small size live in a better situation. Following illustrations, demonstrate this opinion.
First, modern socialization affects the fact that how people live. Indeed, if family members have less number, they can socialize with other member of the community easily. However, humans connected with their own relatives in the past. For example, my grandfather told me, he had an extended family and they gathered each other the weekends. Actually, they enjoyed socializing with their relatives more than others. Thus, the communication declines signification of large families.
Second, the government's policies play a crucial role in modern societies. In fact, advancements in control and support people of the countries help that how people take advantage from the governments' policies. Furthermore, these aids decrease the dependence of family member to each other. Owing to this fact, the importance of large family declines. For instance, in my family there are three members. Additionally, we do not need to have more than this number for providing us with what we require. However, in previous generation families had to have the vast number of members to supply themselves.
Lastly, tiny size of families has a comfortable life newly. Indeed, having many problems at the present time, families do not tend to have many members. In other words, the extended families suffer from several lack of facilities. As an illustration, my neighbor has five children as well as they live with their grandparents. Moreover, they have a small house like us. Although, we can live in a compact house without efforts because of less number of my family, they live with many difficulties. Hence, having a small family brings comfort life.
In conclusion, currently, the extension is not the key feature of a family. Due to the fact, that there are several methods provide people with socialization, and the governments assist people more than family members do. Additionally, easy life can be established by the compact family rather than the large one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21119592875 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79832747374 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539440203562 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4342017038 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1428571429 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0357142857 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180701120843 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049280956782 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375681081006 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111163372721 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186493823106 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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