Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, e-mail, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
In the modern era, advancement in technology and the internet play the substantial role in human life. Increasing competition in each and every field causes people are more engaging their hectic work in which they have not much time to for face to face conversation, therefore people now use the internet to connect with their relative and friends. From my perspective view, I disagree to statement that face to face communication better than other kinds of the communication. I choose my stance because of few specific reasons which are described in forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, Phone calls save time and money of the human because of everyday person cannot travel to talk with their friends and family. In a current position of the world, each person has at least mobile but mostly youngster uses the smartphone for communication is cheaper than travel long distances. In addition, business world, people organize the national and international meeting on online based by used of the internet it saves money to expensive air ticket. who person are live in away from their home they can also easily communicate with their family and friend, for example, I live in the hostel I daily talk to my parents via phone calls and I feel better after the talk with them.
Secondly, email and letters help to easier convey the message to each person. For instance, in industrial and business bases, people send thousands of advertising via mail to each other; it is easier because of if recipients interest in particular mail they would reply; beneficial for both recipients and sender they can easier exchanges each information’s in just second but it is not possible to meet every person and introduce of each product to recipients.
Lastly, the person makes good relationship with other people, all people are busy in their hectic work, they have not the time to meet personally and everyday talks with them. But the phone call and email make stronger communication power to connect to each other. We can daily see and talk with friend and parents to video and audio call. Furthermore, face to face communication, not all time better because of person is sometimes feel boring to see one face every day.
In sum up, modern technology make easier human life they can touch with friends and family even live in away from them, I certainly disagree that face to face communication is better than other sorts of communication because of email, letter, phone call, and internet are more enhance the relationship, easier to contact and save money and time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...it saves money to expensive air ticket. who person are live in away from their home...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a person'.
Suggestion: who is a person
...it saves money to expensive air ticket. who person are live in away from their home they c...
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Line 4, column 434, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'felt'.
Suggestion: felt
...e better because of person is sometimes feel boring to see one face every day. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97897196262 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7259246765 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481308411215 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.821904915 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.066666667 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5333333333 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211057689737 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830552616504 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897045324309 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137005396737 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729171837608 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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