Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays in modern life, people around the world are very busy with their work. So some people think that games are a waste of time. But other people think that games are as important for adults as they are for children. I, on the other hand, strongly believe that games are as essential for adults as they are for children because it can help people relax, learn more knowledge and create many good relationships.
Firstly, games are important, as a result of; activities such as games are fun and can help relax. After a hard day of work, outdoor games such as badminton, volleyball, baseball, and basketball not only help with relaxation, but can feel healthy as well.
Secondly, I think games are as important for adults as they are for children is right therefore games are also a good source for learning. Puzzles, chess, crosswords, and quizzes are great examples of learning through games. For instance, by playing crossword puzzles in English, I learn many interesting words as well as things about American culture. With chess, you must think a lot to find out a way to beat your opponent. So through games, you may gain critical thinking that can help you in real life
Finally, games are necessary for all people, as a consequence, games can create many good relationships. For example, if you play some teamwork activities like volleyball, soccer, hockey, etc, you can have more good friends. As a result, they can help you in your field at work, at study or they can help you in other fields.
In conclusion, I think games era as important for adults as they are for children. Feeling relax, learning new things, and building new relationships are just some of the reasons to continue playing games as an adult.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...and building new relationships are just some of the reasons to continue playing games as an...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244252873563 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.140804597701 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0977011494253 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0344827586207 0.046263068375 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0603448275862 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.163793103448 0.118717715034 138% => OK
Participles: 0.0201149425287 0.0351676179071 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56496913562 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00862068965517 0.0309702414327 28% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00287356321839 0.00188951952338 152% => OK
Determiners: 0.0459770114943 0.0887237588012 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0287356321839 0.0209618222197 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00287356321839 0.0139019557991 21% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1728.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 300.0 408.028673835 74% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303333333333 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226666666667 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56496913562 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513333333333 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 51.5871063441 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0799201596 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.2 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.644075263715 207% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 42.6666666667 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.81707317073 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498097231168 0.300154397459 166% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166050364804 0.103427244359 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.122934452791 0.0752933317313 163% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.566241637589 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163385872262 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216672187256 0.114077575197 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13112512687 0.0781384742642 168% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.292552395311 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0554041465357 0.067059652881 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335738231261 0.210909579961 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851167576526 0.0618886996521 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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