Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for people to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, instead of staying in their home communities for their whole lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The era of 21st century needs highly talented people who have profound knowledge and caliber to take risk owing to enhance their ability. To being as adult, if one ought to accelerate their performance, they have to come out from their comfortable zone. To me, I firmly believe that person's growth is depend on how much they experienced new things and how they handle it. Hence, I believe that one should move out from their hometowns when they become adults and capable of take responsibility of themselves instead of staying with their communities for whole lives. Here, I provides some reasons for agreement as below.
First, once you become mature, you can able to identify the difference between what is wrong and good for you. According to one proverb, "hundreds books does not teach you as one experience can". So, the chief reason is that when a person leave their comfort zone, they would get more exposure from out side of their home town. Additionally, people can learn many things and get wide variety of knowledge from different places, which would more helps to improve their caliber. We have seen many successful people who left their home town due to get various opportunities, which was highly impacted in their life. For example, recent Goggle CEO Sundar pichai is basically from India but left his country to enhance career.
Secondly, when youngster lives with their families or communities, they could become more dependent on them to survive. Therefore, they will not take responsibilities of themselves and as a results, they would become careless, less creative, apathetic about their career. Hence, to become independent and self-esteem one should move out from their native.
Nonetheless, some studies shows that many youngsters do suicides or heinous crime because of loneliness or affection of wrong doing people. So, if youngster will move out from their family or hometowns, then they become free to do anything. Moreover, according to some research scientist found that people would more happier if they are with their love ones in their hometowns. Notwithstanding that, there are some advantages for people to not leaving their hometowns but experience and learn new thing is weights more over that.
In summary, It can be said that people should leave their hometowns once they become mature young adult to explore the world and acquire new things which helps a lot to develop them as independent personality. However, we should not neglect the negative side impact which turns in anxiety, loneliness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...able zone. To me, I firmly believe that persons growth is depend on how much they exper...
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Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...I firmly believe that persons growth is depend on how much they experienced new things...
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Line 1, column 576, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...ir communities for whole lives. Here, I provides some reasons for agreement as below. ...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...zone, they would get more exposure from out side of their home town. Additionally, peopl...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...e responsibilities of themselves and as a results, they would become careless, less creat...
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Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...earch scientist found that people would more happier if they are with their love ones in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14663461538 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65669157485 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543269230769 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1261654611 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.05 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413919046703 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134040061029 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947910709367 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243727865695 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080096321183 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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