Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Before tendering my opinion, I guess it is crucial to take quick glance on this argument on both sides. Some people believe that if they will know the whole events all around the world that will make them satisfy knowledgeably. But others agree that this kind of event will destroy their feelings. In my perspective I do agree with the second group of people because of numerous reasons why I subscribed to a distinct attitude elaborating cogently in subsequent paragraphs.
First reason coming in my mind consolidating my standpoint is ignoring all the events in this world that led to make people’s life better. Furthermore I pose that the unpleasant events end up ruin our lives. For instance, the last week I was watching one of the terrible events in Europe, when one guy shoot more than seventy incent people without any reason just because they came from other countries. Moreover, that kind of news eventually impact my life in general and my day specifically.
Second reason is that the uncertain type of event influence people life by letting them be UN-socialize and lonely all the time due to in fact, they prefer watching news and looking for events. Instead of going outside with friends or even watching something much amusing than just sit and listen to unlikely events from friends or even from t.v or spending some time with their family. So in my opinion, basically we need to focus on a thing which is more important for better and healthy life style.
Additionally, many studies claimed that knowing all the unhappily events that will affect the youngest persons too. Also it's considering waste the people time and skills. In contrast to the people who’s ignoring every single event and just focusing on their talents and skills which let their life full of thrives and properties. Therefore people have to know which events are best to hear and which other events not allowed to focusing on. But if they don't pay attention to this particular matter, the people probably would live their life neglectful, which result superficial knowledge for them in the future because they distracted their minds.
To put it briefly, I strongly agree that ignoring all events in this world will make the life better especially for specific majority of people who’s trying to find a solution for this events. In a nutshell, in fact, there are multiplicity of other factors supplementing the aforementioned statements, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, i guess, in contrast, in fact, in general, kind of, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00710900474 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67712214828 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530805687204 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7563507951 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.388888889 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196953427936 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659197039052 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046462356668 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119028356136 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336815278524 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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