Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There has always been serious discussion about the optimal working days in a week.As a matter of fact, Many distinct combinations have been experimented in various countries throughout recent decades. However, there seems to be no definitive answer to the question that how many days one should go to work. In my view, given a choice between working three days a week for longer hours and five days a week with shorter hours, the former seems more promising. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, as a result of it, one would have two extra days as holidays. This added time can be used for a variety of activities. Spending more time with your beloved family, going to 3-4 days vacations on a more regular basis are among some benefits of such a system. In addition, because of such continuos leisure, people would start their next week with increasing energy. My uncle's situation is a good example of this. He is a fireman in the central fire department in Tehran, the capital city of my country. Since they are required to stay on station for three consecutive days, while being ready for any possible mission whenever it may occur, they shall be at home for rest of the week. He gets to go to his beautiful villa at the countryside every weekened, enjoying the sublime weather with his loved ones.
Secondly, the hours that an individual may get home sooner in a 5-days working condition, are not of any particularly good use. To be more specific, at evening or late afternoon most of the recreational resorts, shopping centers or other public places worth going to with your family, are either extremely crowded or closed. Moreover, due to numerous activities that people are involved in on their free time after work, it might be difficult to get together or truly feel relaxed. For instance, when I arrive home after a long day in university, I barely find anyone or anything worthwhile to spend time with. Basically, Everyone has something to do while I am too exhausted for even the most amusing things imaginable. During that period, My Brother goes to his basketball class, my mother is busy doing housework and friends are as tired as me. Consequently, I am confined to options like lying down on the sofa surfing the internet, playing video games or in the best case scenario watching a movie.
In conclusion, I hold the view that it is more enjoyable to able to be occupied with your job for just 3 days as opposed to the normal 5 days. Not only do longer holidays invigorate you, but also useless time wasted on unimportant matters would be utilised in a better way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6974248927 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57259623636 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603004291845 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4678983103 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.238095238 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1904761905 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09523809524 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329096215424 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822263754783 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715599240647 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19633840502 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661141920503 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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