Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most of the employees try to adjust their working hours to be enjoyable for them. Some of them prefer to have a job with short hours while working five days a week. On the other hand, some prefer to do their job at only three days while working for long hours at each day. In my opinion, doing a job with longer hours is better and here are my reasons which will be elaborated in next paragraphs.
Firstly, we could our job more easily and enjoyable when we work for shorter hours per day. In this case, we will do our responsibilities at the workspace with less pressure and stress. Working for long hours at each day may be difficult for us to focus on our responsibilities at whole time we are in our workplace. Sometimes we become tired or stressful at the ends of working at each day. For example, in the most of the time, the teacher who teaches the high school children prefer to work shorter time per day since the teaching is very boring and difficult task. While working for just 3-4 hours per days would be more enjoyable for teachers since they will have more energy to teach the students.
In addition, working for shorter hours per days is more enjoyable since it leaves us evenings hours at end of each day. In the evening times, we have the opportunity to be with our family or may use our time to go to see our relatives. After the stressful job, the evening hours is very important times for use since we can refresh ourselves. For example, my mother who works for factory always tries to come back to home in the evening to be with family. At the most of the times, she prepares food and we go to the jungle or see to eat our dinner.
To put in a nutshell, in the modern society where the human face with so many stress and worries I think working shorter hours per day is much better. In the shorter hours per days, our workplace could be more enjoyable since we may never be tired. In addition, we could utilize our evening time to go out of our home to refresh ourselves and have time to be more with our family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stress seems to be countable; consider using: 'many stresses'.
Suggestion: many stresses
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218225419664 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.146282973621 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0743405275779 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.052757793765 0.046263068375 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.083932853717 0.0685040099705 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15587529976 0.118717715034 131% => OK
Participles: 0.0263788968825 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.2958247465 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0455635491607 0.0309702414327 147% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0767386091127 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0263788968825 0.0209618222197 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119904076739 0.0139019557991 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2042.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 385.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3038961039 5.86048508987 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.231168831169 0.338922669872 68% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.176623376623 0.251872472559 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0961038961039 0.174417080927 55% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0701298701299 0.112833075102 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2958247465 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418181818182 0.524397521467 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.5598185155 59.2087087015 74% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3888888889 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5190560606 48.84282405 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.444444444 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 39.0512265512 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.41525423729 1.45489161554 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37187946876 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166592380359 0.103427244359 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0881635012346 0.0752933317313 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.536157748589 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0936567570664 0.151897553556 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164696576144 0.114077575197 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063397092064 0.0781384742642 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.526598365645 0.336927656856 156% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0848691113379 0.067059652881 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283175702213 0.210909579961 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497742445599 0.0618886996521 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.