Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The machine age in which we live and advances in technology, have widened understanding gaps between younger and older generations so much so that friends have taken families place, and altered into invaluable feature of one's social life more than ever. In such "virtual era", one can easily expand his or her friend circles, thanks to the stream of friend suggestions in social networks such as Facebook, Instagram, and Tweeter, to name but a few. Despite all the excitement, and new experiences which we can enjoy beside new peoples, I—for one—subscribe to the idea that, the old friends are irreplaceable, for a great number of reasons, three of which—that is—having better perception, being more honest, and being more reliable are the most conspicuous ones.
To begin with, old friends have good understanding of one another’s belief, habits, and rules of which they must be aware, and for which they must respect. In other words, an amount of time which friends have spent together, and a few mistakes which they have done not only molded their friendship into a firm one but also deepened their perception of each other, which is rare within new friends. In addition, although meeting new friends can bring about memorable moments and different notions, "it takes a long time to grow an old friend" who knows us deeply and criticizes us as a mirror.
Another privilege of the old friends has to do with a loyalty and trustworthy that one can enjoy. We have only a few close friends selected among our casual acquaintances. These close friends, most of which remained through time and hardships, are so reliable persons that we can make a choice based on their advice, and let them in on our secrets. In today's world, virtual social networks provide us with an opportunity to connect other people and expand our world. However, how much we can trust these "one-day-old" friends. The more superficial friendships that we will have, the less trust that we can put in friends, the more solitary we will feel.
Last but not least, old friends are more dependable inasmuch as one can undoubtedly count on them. We can lean on our "beloved friends", whose eyes shone with our happiness, whose tears shed with our hardships and defeats, and whose presence is felt even from hundred of miles away. On the contrary, the "one-day-old" friendships cannot enjoy such intimacy and depth. For instance, several years ago, I had to conduct some tests for my master thesis. The only library in my country that have the technology had some technical problems. I tweeted this issue, and just my old friends living in Germany called me, and subsequently, organized whole procedures and sent me the results and the laboratory’s confirmation. It is crystal clear that this story could not have happy ending, if my friend ignored my tweet like my virtual friends.
According to these reasons and so many others, I do believe keeping in touch with old friends are the best policy on the ground that they are familiar with one's personality, are more sincere, and are more supportive. When we honestly ask ourselves which person in life mean most to us, we often find our old friends near our family, don’t we?
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'honestly', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'in other words', 'on the contrary', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2067381317 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.125574272588 0.158761421928 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114854517611 0.0866891130778 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0505359877489 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0750382848392 0.0685040099705 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0995405819296 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0275650842266 0.0351676179071 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97410042589 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0153139356815 0.0309702414327 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00153139356815 0.00188951952338 81% => OK
Determiners: 0.0612557427259 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0229709035222 0.0209618222197 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0275650842266 0.0139019557991 198% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3289.0 2387.08602151 138% => OK
No of words: 543.0 408.028673835 133% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05709023941 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261510128913 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16758747698 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106813996317 0.112833075102 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97410042589 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546961325967 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 68.8199443775 59.2087087015 116% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.8571428571 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3188170518 48.84282405 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.619047619 120.699889404 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 52.0081557485 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.32926829268 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272169582834 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.094052588564 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0644851959577 0.0752933317313 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.488101434494 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137008005459 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102286493119 0.114077575197 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484352522706 0.0781384742642 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342181837005 0.336927656856 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0437193982209 0.067059652881 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18996658913 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118059623449 0.0618886996521 19% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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