Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship has a tremendous impact on our progress and well-being. It
enhances our success in immeasurable ways because it encompasses our core. Therefore, I disagree to be with an old friend and don't make a new friend because new friends could influence your education and health respectively.
First, engaging with new friends improve your knowledge efficiently. Indeed, when you cooperate and collaborate with peers with different ideas and backgrounds, this thing will enhance your education acquisition. For example, I am in a medical field person, I used to all my friends in the same scope. Once a day, I met a woman in the daycare of my san, she was working in the daycare as a babysitter, we became friends, I realized that my capabilities crucially improved regarding how to communicate with kids and how to deal with them. This experiment taught me that having new friends with a different field is the foundation of your success in your lives.
Moreover, being immersed in an environment surrounding with different new people can boost your health. In fact, when you built a vital relationship with a friend which has specific interesting such as personal trainer peer, this will cause a significant effect on your well-being. For instance, before few months, I took my son to the park for playing, I met a person who was the mother of other kid in the park, she was working as a personal trainer, she encouraged me to go to the gym with her in my leisure time to do some exercises. As a result, I began to go to the gym regularly which helped me to build my muscle tone and to shape my body. Accordingly, my physical appearance positively ameliorated. In addition, I became healther person and started to seek for healthy food. Hence, building an intimate rapport with a new friend has a dramatic effect on your welfare.
For the aforementioned reasons, having new friends could increase your perspective and broaden your horizon. Not only in acquiring further information about nurturing, but also to improve your health. Hopefully, all people will follow this trend to evolve their lives consequently.
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engaging with new friends improve your knowledge efficiently.
engaging with new friends improves your knowledge efficiently.
I used to all my friends in the same scope.
I am used to all my friends in the same scope. //"used to" means in the past and you are no longer doing it and "I'm used to" means you are still used or accustomed to doing it
before few months,
few months ago,
I became healther person
I became a healthier person
Sentence: In addition, I became healther person and started to seek for healthy food.
Error: healther Suggestion: No alternate word
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flaws:
the main issue is that you like to use pronouns as the subject of sentences, for example:
I took my son to the park for playing,
I met a person who was the mother of other kid in the park,
she was working as a personal trainer,
she encouraged me to go to the gym with her in my leisure time to do some exercises. As a result,
I began to go to the gym regularly which helped me to build my muscle tone and to shape my body. Accordingly,
my physical appearance positively ameliorated. In addition,
I became healther person and started to seek for healthy food.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 358 350
No. of Characters: 1714 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.35 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.788 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.846 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.775 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.319 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.5 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.15 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...I disagree to be with an old friend and dont make a new friend because new friends c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97198879552 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.958065422 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551820728291 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6618392177 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6111111111 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279397330639 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923250228854 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851214302402 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148428806828 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804750889776 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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