Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Througout history friendship has always palyed a prominent role in man's life. Sevaral aspects should be taken into accound talking about friendship ties.From my own prespective, the ability to keep old friend could be regarded as an identifier of one's social skills and I will illustrate my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
The first reason i would like to bring about is all the efforts and time which you have spent for your friendship. It is no secret to anyone that constructing new ties is easier than keeping old ones. Old friends are pepole who may know each other for over a decade thus they tend to be more familiar with eachother's personality. However, finding new friends who could get to know you thoroughly in a relatively short time is unlikely to happen. The hustle and bustle of the hectic life we have nowadays makes it critical to have some people to spend our time with.I would rather have my sapre time with my old friends than spending my time with some people whom I just get to know. I could always find some peace and relief with my old buddies. We have this gathering time with the goal of refreshing our souls, which is a thing among us for about 6 years now.
Another equally noteworthy reason is that, Old friend are more reliable as you have known them for a longer period of time. They have got this strong emotional relation that makes them do whatever they could, when one of them is in trouble. Take an old experience of mine as an example. Back then when I just moved to a new city I faced some financial problems and this was the time that I knew I had to ask for help. I was not able to solve that by my own. I asked 2 friends who were living in the same city and guess what? The person who helped me was my friend whom I knew for 5 years. I am really thankful to have such amazing people as friends.
Long story short, Making friends with people is always a good thing. But, I highly recommend to keep the old ones as these pepole are the ones you could rely one and find peace with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, so, then, thus, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35883905013 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28417116656 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543535620053 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2899684339 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9473684211 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211737906973 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643750419386 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418116582543 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123426420691 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447888238552 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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