Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
In the era of 21st century, every people connected with each other across the globe owing to technology. The technology make our life easy and now it becomes a part of our lives. Today's people are invented different technology to make work easy in every field such as television, agriculture, transportation, science, etc. In my view, i firmly believe that modern transportation and shipping has made great impact in our lives.
The chief reason behind why I agree with the statement is the global capitalization, which helps to boost the economy of any nation. Due to the ease of transportation among the countries, we can get many varieties of things. For example, In India some decades ago, the people were not able to buy some brand in India and they had to choose alternative brand of particular products. But now, we can buy easily any product, which is not made in India. Hence, the ease of trade between the countries are possible due to highly available transportation and shipping system. Because of the capitalization, the countries are depending on each other and as a result it enhance economy growth.
Secondly, the modern transportation technology made our life easy for travelling. We can reach out the any place across the globe via airplane. For example, before the invention of plane, people used to travel by train or by ship, which took a long time. In fact, nowadays travelling trough plane make our journey easy by saving time and money.
However, we have seen many mishap happened due to the modern transportation facilities such as plane crashes, some automatic car locked people inside a car due to technical problem. Moreover, due to the capitalization some time a country could face many financial crises. Although there are disadvantages of modern transportation, advantages of modern technology in transportation weigh more on that.
To sum up, It can be said that, modern transportation helps in economical growth of country and provide us wide range of product which is needful in our day to day life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Line 3, column 663, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
...ending on each other and as a result it enhance economy growth. Secondly, the modern...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun mishap seems to be countable; consider using: 'many mishaps'.
Suggestion: many mishaps
...ime and money. However, we have seen many mishap happened due to the modern transportati...
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Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...id that, modern transportation helps in economical growth of country and provide us wide r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01764705882 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98708291814 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547058823529 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6312611776 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7777777778 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13937557658 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464440950649 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456745829493 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744847157351 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176896599637 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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