Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future.
Since the dawn of humanity, human beings follow different ways to reach successful times, but in most of which they have been encountered difficult situations. Although some people have this opinion that harsh conditions deviate a person from a direct path through making a sense of frustration, but people should go through the impassable ways to reach advancement in the life. So, as far as I am concerned, difficult situations play a crucial role in everyone's life to achieve the zenith of progress and in being prosperous person in today's world. The supporting reasons for this issue can be comprehensively described as follows:
In first stage, experiences through showing the strength and flaws points of a work, operates as a mirror for people. As a mirror shows a person's appearance honestly, the past experiences learn the reasons of each defeat or win, as well. In the history of humanity, the prosperous people always have changed their wrong behaviors and were persist to this famous sentence that victory is achievable only after frequent defeats. In addition, the greatest scientists in academic history, always have improved their wrong theories during the time and after accepting difficult situation as well as bringing valuable experiences from their mistakes could offer outstanding services and achievements to the all people in the world so that nowadays the impacts of their works are irreplaceable. Therefore, the past contents of valuable experiences for those of people who want reach a happiness, hopeful, and advanced life in the future.
Second, difficult and harsh situations in the past teach patience, persistence, and endurance to human beings. A person learn this fact that in order to achieve different goals in the life, should many factors accompany with each other, and this adaptability is realized when all human resources focus on their objectives with high attentions and calm down during the process since making bad decisions may lead not only the complex but also a society to irrecoverable circumstances. On the other hand, many statistics confirm the fact that patience alongside the attempt is a key of success and overcome to difficulties in the future and a person can bear tough moments in facing inevitable common problems in today's world.
All in all, life is rife of various situations in which any person can look that condition from positive point of view and use from its lesson to improve his or her goals and objectives in upcoming future or even edify the personality and bring significant prosperity for the society in general and for the family in particular. So, all these lessons can contribute a person in leading to victory, endurance, hope, and so forth and by making proper decisions manages the miseries in the life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... person's appearance honestly, the past experiences learn the reasons of each defeat or win...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'persisted'.
Suggestion: persisted
... changed their wrong behaviors and were persist to this famous sentence that victory is...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...and endurance to human beings. A person learn this fact that in order to achieve diff...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'honestly', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'in addition', 'in general', 'in particular', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258823529412 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.11568627451 0.158761421928 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11568627451 0.0866891130778 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0392156862745 0.046263068375 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0196078431373 0.0685040099705 29% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.141176470588 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91025432503 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021568627451 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.00196078431373 0.00188951952338 104% => OK
Determiners: 0.119607843137 0.0887237588012 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0156862745098 0.0209618222197 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0078431372549 0.0139019557991 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2818.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 454.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20704845815 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385462555066 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295154185022 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218061674009 0.174417080927 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151982378855 0.112833075102 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91025432503 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539647577093 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 63.6922279066 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 34.9230769231 20.5533526081 170% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.8791748668 48.84282405 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 216.769230769 120.699889404 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.9230769231 20.5533526081 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23076923077 0.644075263715 191% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 64.4384954253 45.7405998639 141% => OK
Elegance: 2.48314606742 1.45489161554 171% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342892733092 0.300154397459 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.160597723734 0.103427244359 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0691031257952 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.628239751909 0.497263757937 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143798961568 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177018935816 0.114077575197 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515229175088 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.477488283725 0.336927656856 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0239928741437 0.067059652881 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252433791874 0.210909579961 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454638862696 0.0618886996521 73% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 76 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23 Out of 30