Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made in your own country are more interesting than movies and programs made in others.
With the help of economic globalization and the Internet, people can enjoy not only their local movies and TV programs, but also they could watch various TV programs and movies oversea. Recently, people started to discuss which one is more ineresting. Some people though the local movies and TV shows are more funny, other people were in the oppsite. In my opinion, I totally agree that the movies and TV shows made in other countries are more interesting.
First, The movies and TV shows oversea may let us learn more advanced topics and concepts, it open our eyes and have access to something fancy. Under the process of globalization, there are many common and acceptable values rise and spread all over the world. For example, I like a TV programs named Gays Help Guys, which told a four gay hosts help stright men improve their home decoration and their looks. I watched it every Sunday with my friends. What's more, this TV shows not only made me learn how to fix my dorm but also it made me start to understand there is no different between guys and common people except their relationships, which helped me to overcome some biases on gays. Therefore the TV programs oversea could really convey some important and fancy concepts.
Also, movie companies in other counties could have more creative and advanced ways to represent their movies and shows. Their moive industry are much more mature than the local movies, which means they have more productive ways to produce movies and make movies more close to the audience.
For instance, last year I had been to the Disneyland and Global Moives, I was really impressed by their profession of making moives. All the process In this way
To sum up
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7707641196 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37519920956 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2286608158 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274419339151 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958893287692 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818508765887 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126882555076 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111715354997 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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