Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
Undoubtedly, money plays a vital role in our lives and no one can deny its importance in people’ success. From my point of view, money is the symbol of success and people can do their favorite activities only if they have enough money. Earning a lot of money has countless advantage for people and in the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, we can purchase our necessary things with money. Frankly, most people live in small rented apartments in my country but if they have a higher income, they will buy big houses and get rid of small apartments. Rich people can drive expensive cars and travel to other countries on weekends. They can register their children in the best schools and pay for extra courses and classes for them. Furthermore, they will take their children to most advanced hospitals, if they become sick.
In the second place, people behave toward rich persons respectfully because they have high status in the society. They can hire other people to clean their houses, educate their children and so forth. Rich people can provide their children with the opportunity to study in high-ranked universities. In addition, in some countries, rich parents help their sons and daughters marry. For example, they buy an apartment for them or hold wedding ceremony.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that although earning a lot of money is a symbol of success, other things are as important as money. For instance, in my opinion, people who help the poor to escape from the poverty are successful persons because they do a useful activity and serve the country.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that rich people are successful in their personal lives based on the reasons which I outlined above. Of course, there are other things in the world that can be the symbol of success.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, frankly, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, first of all, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86996904025 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58695733334 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2980666958 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5294117647 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172934874495 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062161304713 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627228938058 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11187389353 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843439545325 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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