Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every decision in people's lives is critically important to themselves. Personally, I believe that young people now are better able to make decisions about their own lives rather than depending on their parents. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following passage.
To begin with, Internet usage is more prevalent nowadays, which means young people can obtain information from every place on earth. A few decades ago, young people could only gain information from books or their parents. Since the information in books was mostly didactic at the time, it usually corresponded to what parents may say. In contrast, now they can use this new technology to ask for others' advice and discern whether the decisions made by their parents are logical or flawed. For example, some parents tend to help their kids decide which subject to major in college due to some economical reasons. However, these pecuniary concerns could already become obsolete. Young people now are able to debunk their parents with enormous and reliable information online. If they were in the era of the last generation, they would have obeyed their parents' orders without any resources to decline it.
Furthermore, society has changed. To be more specific, more parents nowadays are willing to listen to their children's opinions. For example, my parents wanted me to take engineering majors in college, while my inclination is towards mathematics. My parents were unsympathetic to my choice because mathematics graduates in my country can only become teachers with low paid. However, they did not force me to abandon my choice. Instead, they asked me about my future plans and my reasons persuaded them.
In addition, many laws about domestic violence have been implemented in modern years, which means children are able to resist their parents now. If parents want their children to follow their command by punishing them with fists or sticks, kids can just simply call the police or related organization to protect themselves from being hurt.
In summary, since internet usage prevails, society has been different and some domestic violence laws have been applied, young people in modern days have far fewer restrictions from their parents compared to the past. Therefore, I agree with the conception that young people now are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...subject to major in college due to some economical reasons. However, these pecuniary conce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, i feel, in addition, in contrast, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19689119171 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5635313924 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564766839378 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3680656203 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5238095238 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383015851745 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116473514692 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124782509388 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238985196036 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119918448628 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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