Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Our appearance and the clothes that we put on is very important, especially when we met someone new. Becuase that is the only thing that they learn about us before having a chance to know us. Some people think that the clothes that we wear change our behaviour; others would disagree. In my opinion,People behave differently when they wear different clothes for two reasons.
First and foremost, people choose their clothes depend on the place where they want to be in. When they want to be in formal places, they use formal clothes, when they are with they friends they use some comfortable clothes and different kinds of clothes are used for exercise, weddings etc. For example, I remember last summer I went to my friend's party, It was a party to say goodbye to us when he wanted to migrate to the USA. That day I was really busy at work and I had no time to go home and change my clothes. Thus, I decided to go to the party straight from my work. It was an awful day because I met some of my friends after years and because I dressed formally I could not be fun or do everything that I wanted. They played football but I could not play that with my tight pants and I just tried to sit in the yard and talk to elderly people.
Another reason is that people try to judge others, especially someone that they had just met upon on their clothing. Because our appearance is the only thing that they know about us when they meet us for the first time and we try to make our appearance in a way that we think is good. For instance, When I was in that party, they were so many people that were really polite to me and they really respect me. If I see the story from this aspect, I really liked it. Their behaviour towards me made me be formal and well-behaved too and I realized that people do not respect me in work because we are at work but it is for the formal clothes that I put on. And this story taught me that I should think about my appearance more than being on time. Bad clothing would not let you have fun even when you are with your best friends.
In sum, the clothes that you put on not only affect the way that you behave but also change the way that others behave to you. Thus, everyone should care about their clothing and be aware that others would judge you by your appearance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'friend'
Suggestion: friend
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.178571428571 0.229887763892 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.186974789916 0.158761421928 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0525210084034 0.0866891130778 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0483193277311 0.046263068375 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.159663865546 0.0685040099705 233% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128151260504 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0105042016807 0.0351676179071 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.19361358888 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357142857143 0.0309702414327 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0567226890756 0.0887237588012 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147058823529 0.0209618222197 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0231092436975 0.0139019557991 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2297.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 439.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23234624146 5.86048508987 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.24145785877 0.338922669872 71% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.154897494305 0.251872472559 61% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0820045558087 0.174417080927 47% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0501138952164 0.112833075102 44% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.19361358888 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430523917995 0.524397521467 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.9053328145 59.2087087015 79% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.95 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0295937396 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.85 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.95 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 37.4397494305 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 0.803191489362 1.45489161554 55% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348180997096 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13614906938 0.103427244359 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0675537607891 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493190309365 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139640842872 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130950093544 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798139634495 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380357222701 0.336927656856 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0477327417821 0.067059652881 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262016252153 0.210909579961 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427626698916 0.0618886996521 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.