Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, We are living in a rapidly changing world and the age of information. One way we can acquire a large amount of experience and benefits is traveling. There have been much debate about the benefits of traveling inside a country or abroad. Personally speaking, I am of the opinion that the advantages of traveling in own countries outweighs abroad.
First, it goes without saying that one aim of traveling is for business. Businessmen travel to different areas to sell their products to earn more profit and establish a durable business. Restricting the business to a limited area will not be stable, because the market fluctuates many times, and having several markets in different areas can stabilize trading and business. As a matter of fact, business in foreign countries is difficult for merchants who have not previous experiences. Trading with other foreign merchant have its own problems: knowing the target country's trading rules, the difficulties of financial matters with foreign countries, all make foreign business difficult. On the other hand, knowing inside potential markets, knowing about trading and financial rules can facilitates trading.
Another function of traveling is for entertainment. Although visiting other country can provide spectacular opportunities to see impressive sights, the difficulties arise in foreign traveling may be severe and can impair the whole journey. When a person travels abroad may not know that country's language, the culture, the foods and son on. I have a bad experience traveling to china when Chinese foods taste were not compatible with me and I was made to eat biscuit for one week. On the other hands, traveling in own country makes possible to plan for whole journey before, knowing settling place, the duration and time schedule all are your own while in a foreign journey tour leaders are responsible for your journey.
Last but not least, the inside journey is much cheaper that foreign traveling. While one should spend three thousand dollars to spend 7 days in Paris, it is possible to enjoy spending a pleasant green place with full facilities where is located in the north of my country for just 300 dollars. Foreign journey may be exciting but spends the whole investment of a typical family, and it is not reasonable to spend such amount of money just for a few days.
In light of the aforementioned details, I would believe that inside traveling is much more beneficial than foreign traveling from different aspects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while, as to, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17733990148 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76627193684 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532019704433 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8527982471 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.631578947 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240329284968 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771757716912 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595474151393 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144894034799 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609419750156 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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