Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Professional athletes, such as football and basketball players, do not deserve the high salaries that they are paid.
There are various perspective toward this issue, as some people might believe that their income is too much and it is not necessary to spend this amount of money for athletes, while others maintain that athletes spend most of their time doing hard exercises and they have not any insurance so they deserve what they get. I personally concur with the second perspective. In the following paragraphs, three conspicuous reasons will cogently elucidate my perspective.
First, the athletes devote their life time to elaborate his or her sport skill to show audience an exciting game. As the Chinese saying goes, one minute on the stage takes ten-years practice. In addition to, in this way, those players play sports not for themselves, but for their country. If an athlete performs well in national competitions and give medal, people would respect his country. For example, when we speak about wrestle, we all remember about Iran since Iranian athletes always get champions in international competitions and give medal. Obviously, People from other country hold the opinion that Iranian are the people who are best at wrestle.
The second thing is worth bearing in mind is the fact that, the athletes always have a short career and they have not any Insurance. For example, when we compare between one professional athlete and one client, we see the professional athlete is much less earn at all. In addition to, their health in danger, Knee back and head, every injured there may be fateful to their career. And after they retire, they have to pay for the high-cost medical bill. Sometimes the hurt will last for a lifetime, which affects their daily life. As we see some athletes in our country, they are forget after their injuries.
And the last but not the least reason justifying the claim is that I think the salary of these athletes is decided by their results in the competition. Obviously all the athletes don’t get a high paid. Only the ones who make a big achievement or bring the victory to the team will receive high salaries and this matter motivate to improve their Effort.The more you win, the more you earn. It’s a simple rule that makes a great effort to improve the level of the sport.
To make a long story short, all the aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to the conclusion that, I think, it is fair that professional athletes get high salaries as they have spent so many years to improve their skills to create something wonderful. It is also fair that the professional athletes should share the profits gained by management for risks of injured or disabled. What have paid to them should not just be the one minute in the Competitions, but it belong to the sport life, may be even the whole life of the athletes. As Muhammad Ali said “I hated every minute of training, but I said, 'Don't quit. Suffer now and live the rest of your life a champion.” All in all I predict, the high salaries of athletes would have better consequences for both themselves and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2509.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 519.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83429672447 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56970640119 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531791907514 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 779.4 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7352658985 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.541666667 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54166666667 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131374761086 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350132224722 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374679552848 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079982435409 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463239186898 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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