Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Reading is more educational than watching movies or TV.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Owing to the advent of the Internet, social media, telecommunication, all the young people are attracted more toward entertaining elements which can satisfied by movies or TV. These invention was made to make our lives easy but many of them used as passing time. To me, I firmly believe that reading is impacted more on young mind rather than watching movies or TV. People used to watch movies or TV when they want to break from your normal life or make fun. So, one wants to really need education then they should prefer reading. I feel this way with few reasons given as below.
First, Reading is the process which enhance our imagination power. Through the reading, we can get profound knowledge about particular topic or area. If people who are in research field, wants to develop ordinary things then they have to first read and understand advance concepts from different published research, journal or article. By doing so they can get idea about what are the flaws in previous invention and what they can add something new which results in better invention. For instance, Eainstine did many invention in their life and all these possible just because he did studies well.
Secondly, education is necessity for a nowadays generation, since without moral education one couldn't get the exposure and they remains be considered as illiterate. The growth of any country is depended on how much population of literate people. Moreover, reading is the basic skill which every one ought to know. For example, when I was in college, my many friends used to read different languages' book as to know about different culture or learn new languages which was helped them a lot once they relocated in different countries because of the career purpose,
Nonetheless, some TV channel also provide us knowledge and wide variety of facts such as weather forecasting gives us the latest information about the weather, news channels give fact about what happening around the globe. Some people also, consider TV as the way of education. However, Today's generation are addicted with social media or movies and imitate their favorite actor's behavior which sometime affect negatively. In the era of 21 century, these TV and movies' had lost young generation's creativity.
In summary, It can be said that reading is more powerful and encouraging factor for education because it provide the ability to enhance our caliber, creativity, imagination power and also, it connect us with reality rather than imitating others behavior from TV or movies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this invention' or 'These inventions'?
Suggestion: This invention; These inventions
...ts which can satisfied by movies or TV. These invention was made to make our lives easy but man...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun invention seems to be countable; consider using: 'many inventions'.
Suggestion: many inventions
... invention. For instance, Eainstine did many invention in their life and all these possible ju...
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Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'study'
Suggestion: study
... all these possible just because he did studies well. Secondly, education is necessi...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...tion, since without moral education one couldnt get the exposure and they remains be co...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
...n one couldnt get the exposure and they remains be considered as illiterate. The growth...
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Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...ime affect negatively. In the era of 21 century, these TV and movies had lost young gen...
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Line 7, column 450, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this TV' or ''?
Suggestion: this TV;
...t negatively. In the era of 21 century, these TV and movies had lost young generations c...
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Line 7, column 485, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...ury, these TV and movies had lost young generations creativity. In summary, It can be sa...
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Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...uraging factor for education because it provide the ability to enhance our caliber, cre...
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Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'connects'?
Suggestion: connects
...ativity, imagination power and also, it connect us with reality rather than imitating o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05966587112 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61572565881 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584725536993 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.6640178767 48.9658058833 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.578947368 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26315789474 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190280071023 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597864260496 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056757885114 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107808313703 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748127969633 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.